Awesome! Firstly, your grasp of scenery is fantastic!! That city looks teriffic, and makes for a wonderfully open first panel, full of life and ready to jump into.

The characters are also nicely drawn, and your shading here is very strong. One thing I would suggest is a panel showing the two characters together (I know panel two does, but one of them is a little hidden by the tree) - what this'll do is make it more obvious to the reader were the characters are in relation to one another, and help them picture the overall scene

A superb page!! Top stuff!!

I remember you showed me this, it's fantastic. I'd say start up a comic series, but then you're almost as lazy as me. Srsly.

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Oh wow man, that's...better than a comic book. This is crazily fantastic, I wanna read more xD

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holy moly
good luck with the second page

It hurts me to admit it...
But you were right.
I'm just as lazy as you are.

...I'll cry tomorrow.

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